Thursday, September 22, 2011

Improvements to seed project

After our in class critique I left feeling like there was a lot to change which is exactly what I did. First I started in the background and brightened the background colors cause a few of the comments thought it was to dark and I agreed it was dull. The I focused on the pot and plant. Most of the comments on my sheet were about confusion of composition. I wasn't making it clear about what I wanted these seed packets to do. I took a suggestion about making it seem like that clock was growing out of the plant. I redrew the pot to make it look more round at the bottom. Them I changes the colors to a brighter color. I also tried to give the plant more of a lively feel instead of being so static I made one of the blades of the plant more life like and bending over the pot.

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